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Post  Byakuya Kuchiki on Sat Mar 29, 2014 3:17 pm

Okay so I'm doing my Bleach fanfic over.. Mostly due to the fact that I can no longer work with a female main character and my story document files were on the laptop I gave away =|.
I have ideas for most of the Gotei 13 (Captains & Lieutenants) but I need help figuring out the rest..
If you like you can make your own character too and I'll put it in, if not, a little help would be nice.
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Available Positions:

4th Squad Lieutenant
7th Squad Captain
9th Squad Captain
13th Squad Captain



Zanpakuto Needed for:

Needed Zanpakutos:

1st Squad Lieutenant
4th Squad Lieutenant
6th Squad Captain
7th Squad Captain
7th Squad Lieutenant
9th Squad Captain
12th Squad Lieutenant (Must be the most OP shit you can think of)
13th Squad Captain
13th Squad Lieutenant




Why are some people in need of a Zanpakuto but not a Character you ask? This is because I already have the character in mind but not a Zanpakuto for them.


Zanpakuto format:


Melee

Melee Zanpakuto Format:

Name: 
Squad & Rank: 
Zanpakuto Name: 

Zanpakuto Type: Melee


Zanpakuto Command: 
Description of Shikai:
Picture of Shikai:
Description of Bankai (if they have any):
Picture of Bankai: 



Kido


Kido Zanpakuto Format:

Name: 
Squad & Rank: 
Zanpakuto Name: 

Zanpakuto Type: Kido


Zanpakuto Command: 
Description of Shikai:
Picture of Shikai:
Description of Bankai (if any):
Picture of Bankai: 
Special Ability:
3 Abilities (if any): 
NB: This includes illusion, poison, etc.



Elemental


Elemental Zanpakuto Format:

Name: 
Squad & Rank: 
Zanpakuto Name: 

Zanpakuto Type: Elemental - Type
Zanpakuto Command: 
Description of Shikai:
Picture of Shikai:
Description of Bankai (if any):
Picture of Bankai: 
3-5 Abilities (Shikai)
3-5 Abilities (Bankai)
NB: This includes, fire, water, light, ice, etc.



NO FIRE ZANPAKUTOS.
NO LIGHTNING ZANPAKUTOS.
I have enough of those.


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My character (An example):

Name: Dante Kiminoko
Zanpakuto Name: Arashi (Storm)
Zanpakuto Type: Elemental - Lightning
Zanpakuto Command: Rage
 
Shikai Abilities:
·         Lightning Cutter – Shoots an ‘X’ shaped lightning attack.
·         Lightning Armor – Shrouds the user in a lightning armor, increasing speed and damage.
·         Lightning Strike – Unleashes a strike of lightning on a single location.
·         Lightning Bullets – Unleashes a wave of small electric attacks.
Bankai 1 Name: Taifū no me (Eye of the Storm)
·         Twin Fangs of Lightning – Jumps in the air and shrouds both swords in immense lightning and stabs his opponent.
·         Lightning Storm – Creates a ‘portal’ above the intended target and then unleashes a vicious storm of lightning.
·         Lightning Eruption – Dante stabs the ground and unleashes a vicious storm of lightning under the target’s feet.
Bankai 2 Name: Rairyū no ikari (Anger of the Lightning Dragon)


·         Transforms into his Zanpakuto Spirit, a huge dragon that can shoot lightning.

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Re: (Help) Bleach fanfic

Post  GladiusStorm on Sat Mar 29, 2014 6:13 pm

I find this really suspicious... I keep get more evidence that you're a certain person.

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Re: (Help) Bleach fanfic

Post  Byakuya Kuchiki on Sat Mar 29, 2014 6:53 pm

GladiusStorm wrote:I find this really suspicious... I keep get more evidence that you're a certain person.
Um.. Okay.
I'm slowly finding more on the internet anyways, this'll probably be deleted soon.

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Re: (Help) Bleach fanfic

Post  HylianPanda on Sun Mar 30, 2014 9:02 am

sooooo this squad 12 zanpakuto

How broken we talking here?
I mean if you need something unbeatable there is always reality manipulation or space-time control.

If you need something strong but beatable you can always do gravity manipulation(which theoretically could just fall into space-time).


Also black on black makes things hard to read @.@

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Re: (Help) Bleach fanfic

Post  Byakuya Kuchiki on Sun Mar 30, 2014 12:12 pm

HylianPanda wrote:sooooo this squad 12 zanpakuto

How broken we talking here?
I mean if you need something unbeatable there is always reality manipulation or space-time control.

If you need something strong but beatable you can always do gravity manipulation(which theoretically could just fall into space-time).


Also black on black makes things hard to read @.@

Sorry, I was too lazy to change it xD. For the Squad 12, beatable ONLY by the Captain-Commander (Who's OP as shit...)Reality Manipulation would fall under Illusionary Zanpakuto's, would it not?
Either way, I just need something really really OP. If you can help, much appreciated Very Happy

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Re: (Help) Bleach fanfic

Post  HylianPanda on Sun Mar 30, 2014 5:19 pm

Ichigo Kurosaki wrote:
HylianPanda wrote:sooooo this squad 12 zanpakuto

How broken we talking here?
I mean if you need something unbeatable there is always reality manipulation or space-time control.

If you need something strong but beatable you can always do gravity manipulation(which theoretically could just fall into space-time).


Also black on black makes things hard to read @.@

Sorry, I was too lazy to change it xD. For the Squad 12, beatable ONLY by the Captain-Commander (Who's OP as shit...)Reality Manipulation would fall under Illusionary Zanpakuto's, would it not?
Either way, I just need something really really OP. If you can help, much appreciated Very Happy

You know that's a good question on what it would fall under. I think if it was a fake reality manipulation it might be illusionary but true reality manipulation would probably fall under it's own type or just one of the unclassified zanpakuto.
As far as powers would be conscerned for reality manipulation...honestly that'd just be plot convenience. With the ability to alter reality you can literally have the character do anything.

But unless your Captain-Commander is a transient being then I have no way how he would beat true reality manipulation.

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Re: (Help) Bleach fanfic

Post  Byakuya Kuchiki on Sun Mar 30, 2014 6:35 pm

HylianPanda wrote:
Ichigo Kurosaki wrote:
HylianPanda wrote:sooooo this squad 12 zanpakuto

How broken we talking here?
I mean if you need something unbeatable there is always reality manipulation or space-time control.

If you need something strong but beatable you can always do gravity manipulation(which theoretically could just fall into space-time).


Also black on black makes things hard to read @.@

Sorry, I was too lazy to change it xD. For the Squad 12, beatable ONLY by the Captain-Commander (Who's OP as shit...)Reality Manipulation would fall under Illusionary Zanpakuto's, would it not?
Either way, I just need something really really OP. If you can help, much appreciated Very Happy

You know that's a good question on what it would fall under. I think if it was a fake reality manipulation it might be illusionary but true reality manipulation would probably fall under it's own type or just one of the unclassified zanpakuto.
As far as powers would be conscerned for reality manipulation...honestly that'd just be plot convenience. With the ability to alter reality you can literally have the character do anything.

But unless your Captain-Commander is a transient being then I have no way how he would beat true reality manipulation.

Nevermind the Zanpakuto, I figured it out! Very Happy It's a Kido-Type inspired by Elfen Lied xD.
In Shikai, his katana deteriorates making his opponents believe he's defenseless and then charge up to him. Later, his opponent is chopped in half/beheaded. This is because in Shikai, his sword takes the form of a dozen invisible arms all wielding a black katana with white edges that are capable of extending over 200 feet (debating if this should be higher or lower). The swords are capable of cutting reishi (Example: Somewhat blasts a fire move against him, the sword can cut the move in half, splitting the fire move to go around the wielder - deceiving enemies that he has a shield). 
Pretty good~
Thanks though! You helped Very Happy

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Re: (Help) Bleach fanfic

Post  Sam on Sun Mar 30, 2014 7:43 pm

Wow that's OP.

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Re: (Help) Bleach fanfic

Post  Byakuya Kuchiki on Sun Mar 30, 2014 9:02 pm

Permafrost wrote:Wow that's OP.
JA! That was what I'm going for xD.
My Captain-Commander's Zanpakuto is hella OP too but this Zanpakuto.. It just makes me proud :'(

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Re: (Help) Bleach fanfic

Post  Byakuya Kuchiki on Mon Mar 31, 2014 6:17 pm

All I need is a Bankai and I'm golden... Although I was maybe thinking instead of 12 arms there's 48 and it stretches to 500-1000 feet.

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Re: (Help) Bleach fanfic

Post  The Old Man on Wed Apr 02, 2014 8:04 pm

I like that your making a bleach fan fic but why tf would squad 12 lieutenant get something that opped?? So I'm guessing the captains Zanpaktou's are godly ??

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Re: (Help) Bleach fanfic

Post  Byakuya Kuchiki on Wed Apr 02, 2014 8:54 pm

Masked Man wrote:I like that your making a bleach  fan fic but why tf would  squad 12 lieutenant get something that opped?? So I'm guessing the captains Zanpaktou's are godly ??

(Let's name him Junshiro for argument's sake) 

      Junshiro was born mute, meaning he could not speak, also, he was renowned as one of the smartest persons ever known to Soul Society, which caused him to graduate from the Spritual Arts Academy quickly and placed in the 12th Division. Not before long, his rank escalated to Lieutenant.
During the 2nd Arc (Arrancar), it is revealed that information regarding Lieutenants & Captains from the Shinigami Research and Development Institute (SRDI) is being transferred to a network located in Hueco Mundo. Initially, the suspect was the 3rd seat who was caught on multiple occassions in suspiscious events, the last one being when she was found in front of a computer when the file was being transferred.
The Captain (Keiko Tsuadasa) was to announce her findings and the culprit at the next Captains Meeting with her two suspects standing by (Junshiro & 3rd seat). To everyone's surprise, Keiko revealed Junshiro to be the culprit. Junshiro then begans smirking then laughing maniacally, much to everyone's surprise that he is capable of speech.
Junshiro reveals he has been concealing his true power ever since he attended the Spiritual Arts Academy, he has been concealing his reiatsu at 15% of his actual power and proclaims himself actually stronger than all Captains. Junshiro then looks at Keiko and compliments her intelligence but tells her that she is not even half his level and escapes the building. A lieutenant then announces to all of Soul Society than he is rogue and he is to be killed on-sight. Junshiro first encounters Squad 11 Lieutenant, Takara Yamane who confronts Junshiro in an attempt to prevent him from waking her captain, Takeshi Kenpachi. Junshiro easily evades Takara and heads on but is blocked off by Mitsuaki Saisei, one of the fastest persons in Soul Society along with Sakura Shihoin and Hikari Takahashi (Squad 2 Lieutenant & Captain respectively). Junshiro reveals he can easily take them all on at the same time and releases his full reiatsu, which cause all opponents before him to crumble to the ground due to the sheer pressure. Takara warns Junshiro by saying "You shouldn't have done that..." as Takeshi Kenpachi races towards Junshiro, maniacally laughing, apparently woken up by his sheer reiatsu and strikes Junshiro in half. 
It is revealed that Junshiro created a clone of himself from a finger-tip worth of reishi and cuts Takeshi from a distance.

MUCH LATER

Junshiro reveals his true Zanpakuto, the Zanpakuto with a dozen arms and swords and is questioned by his Captain saying she had seen his Zanpakuto before and that was not it. Junshiro then begins insulting her intelligence by saying he manufactured a fake-Zanpakuto with the powers of an actual Zanpakuto. He takes out both Zanpakuto's and begins battling the Captain-Commander.


SORRY for the story-worth of information just to answer that one-line question... I got into it a bit xD.

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Re: (Help) Bleach fanfic

Post  Sam on Wed Apr 02, 2014 9:13 pm

7.9/10
would read

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Re: (Help) Bleach fanfic

Post  Byakuya Kuchiki on Thu Apr 03, 2014 5:20 am

Permafrost wrote:7.9/10
would read
Thaaanks, that wasn't even the detailed version xD.

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Post  The Old Man on Thu Apr 03, 2014 6:43 pm

The idea period seems cool I wanna make a character Very Happy

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Post  Byakuya Kuchiki on Thu Apr 03, 2014 6:47 pm

Masked Man wrote:The idea period seems cool I wanna make a character Very Happy
Go for it, 4th Squad Lieutenant, 7th Squad Captain, 9th Squad Captain & 13th Squad Lieutenant are all available.

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