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Post  Byakuya Kuchiki on Thu Mar 13, 2014 5:45 pm

Okay, so I've decided to redo my introduction, seeing as how my older one was hardly clear enough.
Okay so I'm from Jamaica, 15 right now, becoming 16 in May. I'm in my 4th year of High School, my favourite colour is Orange.
I like to listen to Pop & Rock music genres mostly, I seldomly use my brother's PS3. My favourite things to eat are: Popcorn, Fish, American Apples, Pear, Watermelon whilst I dislike: Ackee, Grater Cake, Callaloo, Porridge, Pumpkin and a lot more =|
I like Action, Shooting, Fantasy & RPG games and I find mythology interesting (I know Egyptian, Norse, Atlantean and Greek Mythologies). I dislike: When people say stupid things (It just annoys me..), when people take earphones out of my ears, crowds, lines and when people talk about my life as if they know me.
I love Horror & Comedy movies.
My favourite animes (in order) are: Bleach, Shingeki no Kyojin & Sword Art Online
My favourite mangas (in order) are: Bleach, Rosario + Vampire & Shingeki no Kyojin

As for my deficiencies(/bad qualities)..

I am colour-blind.
I am short.
I have messy hair.
I have a Fast Metabolism (which has caused all the above).
I tend to be short-tempered at times.

>> I'll try to keep it updated if I can.. Happy Gaming~.

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Post  Moo on Thu Mar 13, 2014 6:24 pm

Byakuya Kuchiki wrote:Okay, so I've decided to redo my introduction, (Improper use of comma) seeing as how my older one was hardly clear enough.
Okay so I'm from Jamaica, (This is called awkward diction. F in University.) 15 right now, becoming 16 in May (firstly, beween Jamaica, and 15 there is a missing connecting phrase thus his sentence is fragmented. [I'm/I am] [/] is the rhetoric way of correcting phrases.). I'm in my 4th year of High School, my favourite colour is Orange.
I like to listen to Pop & Rock music genres mostly, I seldomly (seldomly is not a word. [seldom]*)use my brother's PS3. My favourite things to eat are: Popcorn, Fish, American Apples, Pear (Proof your english is not as strong as you feel it is. Jamaicans call Avocado's Pear. Ergo the singular use of the word, however if in fact you were referring to the Pears which the rest of the world acknowledges then you would need to add [s]), [and] Watermelon whilst I dislike: Ackee, Grater Cake, Callaloo, Porridge, Pumpkin and a lot more =|
I like Action, Shooting, Fantasy & RPG games (sentence is awkward, as action, shooting, and fantasy are general terms. Without first insinuating their directed means, your sentence no longer means what you want it to mean. Also comma after RPG games) and (Unnecessary use of And. [. I]*) I find mythology interesting (I know Egyptian, Norse, Atlantean and Greek Mythologies). I dislike: When people say stupid things (It just annoys me.. (Improper use of ellipsis), when people take earphones out of my ears, crowds, lines and when people talk about my life as if they know me.
I love Horror & Comedy movies.
My favourite animes (in order) are: Bleach, Shingeki no Kyojin & Sword Art Online
My favourite mangas (in order) are: Bleach, Rosario + Vampire & Shingeki no Kyojin
(The following excerpt goes against your chosen format.)

As for my deficiencies(/bad qualities)..(improper use of ellipsis)

I am colour-blind.
I am short.
I have messy hair.
I have a F[f]ast Metabolism (which has caused all the above).
I tend to be short-tempered at times.

(All phrases in the above excerpt are fragments.)

>> I'll try to keep it updated if I can.. Happy Gaming~.


... When "Grammar Police" turn out to be little Jamaican boys who know nothing of the English Language Arts.

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Post  Hasashi on Thu Mar 13, 2014 6:34 pm

Byakuya Kuchiki wrote:Okay, so I've decided to redo my introduction, seeing as how my older one was hardly clear enough.
Okay so I'm from Jamaica, 15 right now, becoming 16 in May. I'm in my 4th year of High School, my favourite colour is Orange.
I like to listen to Pop & Rock music genres mostly, I seldomly use my brother's PS3. My favourite things to eat are: Popcorn, Fish, American Apples, Pear, Watermelon whilst I dislike: Ackee, Grater Cake, Callaloo, Porridge, Pumpkin and a lot more =|
I like Action, Shooting, Fantasy & RPG games and I find mythology interesting (I know Egyptian, Norse, Atlantean and Greek Mythologies). I dislike: When people say stupid things (It just annoys me..), when people take earphones out of my ears, crowds, lines and when people talk about my life as if they know me.
I love Horror & Comedy movies.
My favourite animes (in order) are: Bleach, Shingeki no Kyojin & Sword Art Online
My favourite mangas (in order) are: Bleach, Rosario + Vampire & Shingeki no Kyojin

As for my deficiencies(/bad qualities)..

I am colour-blind.
I am short.
I have messy hair.
I have a Fast Metabolism (which has caused all the above).
I tend to be short-tempered at times.

>> I'll try to keep it updated if I can.. Happy Gaming~.
15? 4th year of highschool? does that include 5th, 6th, 7th, and 8th grade? or 6th, 7th, 8th and 9th? Im 15 as well but I am currently in 9th grade.

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Post  Byakuya Kuchiki on Thu Mar 13, 2014 6:48 pm

Moo wrote:
Byakuya Kuchiki wrote:Okay, so I've decided to redo my introduction, (Improper use of commaseeing as how my older one was hardly clear enough.

Noted.

Okay so I'm from Jamaica, (This is called awkward diction. F in University.)
 
I have not been taught of such diction.

15 right now, becoming 16 in May (firstly, beween Jamaica, and 15 there is a missing connecting phrase thus his sentence is fragmented. [I'm/I am] [/] is the rhetoric way of correcting phrases.).

I wasn't trying to go 'full-on grammar' in this Introduction. However, it seems I am being graded on it so I shall do 'full-on-grammar' every time if that's what you want.

I'm in my 4th year of High School, my favourite colour is Orange.
I like to listen to Pop & Rock music genres mostly, I seldomly

(seldomly is not a word. [seldom]*)

I know of this.

use my brother's PS3. My favourite things to eat are: Popcorn, Fish, American Apples, Pear (Proof your english is not as strong as you feel it is. Jamaicans call Avocado's Pear. Ergo the singular use of the word, however if in fact you were referring to the Pears which the rest of the world acknowledges then you would need to add [s]),

I was not referring to an Avocado. I was referring to an actual Pear. However, noted.

[and] 
Watermelon whilst I dislike: Ackee, Grater Cake, Callaloo, Porridge, Pumpkin and a lot more =|
I like Action, Shooting, Fantasy & RPG games (sentence is awkward, as action, shooting, and fantasy are general terms. Without first insinuating their directed means, your sentence no longer means what you want it to mean. Also comma after RPG games) and (Unnecessary use of And. [. I]*) 

Invalid. If I were to correct my own sentence a semi-colon would be used to introduce my likeness towards mythology. Additionally, the sentence is not awkward as the terms are not general; the terms are genres of games.

I find mythology interesting (I know Egyptian, Norse, Atlantean and Greek Mythologies). I dislike: When people say stupid things (It just annoys me.. (Improper use of ellipsis)

The use was not improper.

when people take earphones out of my ears, crowds, lines and when people talk about my life as if they know me.
I love Horror & Comedy movies.
My favourite animes (in order) are: Bleach, Shingeki no Kyojin & Sword Art Online
My favourite mangas (in order) are: Bleach, Rosario + Vampire & Shingeki no Kyojin
(The following excerpt goes against your chosen format.)

What chosen format?

As for my deficiencies(/bad qualities)..(improper use of ellipsis)

Invalid. Ellipsis were used to introduce another term for the word.

I am colour-blind.
I am short.
I have messy hair.
I have a F[f]ast Metabolism (which has caused all the above).
I tend to be short-tempered at times.

No, "F" not "f", "Fast" is capitalized because "Fast Metabolism" is a condition itself, the "Fast" is not an adjective.

(All phrases in the above excerpt are fragments.)

I'm fully aware of that, Moo. You think you're correcting me when I already know the flaws in this introduction.

>> I'll try to keep it updated if I can.. Happy Gaming~.


... When "Grammar Police" turn out to be little Jamaican boys who know nothing of the English Language Arts.

You think you're correcting me when I already know the flaws. I was not writing with 'full-on grammar', if you were too busy trying to make me look stupid you would have realized I was being somewhat casual. Better luck next time, Moo.

PS: Let me know when you grow up.

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Post  Byakuya Kuchiki on Thu Mar 13, 2014 6:48 pm

Hasashi wrote:
Byakuya Kuchiki wrote:Okay, so I've decided to redo my introduction, seeing as how my older one was hardly clear enough.
Okay so I'm from Jamaica, 15 right now, becoming 16 in May. I'm in my 4th year of High School, my favourite colour is Orange.
I like to listen to Pop & Rock music genres mostly, I seldomly use my brother's PS3. My favourite things to eat are: Popcorn, Fish, American Apples, Pear, Watermelon whilst I dislike: Ackee, Grater Cake, Callaloo, Porridge, Pumpkin and a lot more =|
I like Action, Shooting, Fantasy & RPG games and I find mythology interesting (I know Egyptian, Norse, Atlantean and Greek Mythologies). I dislike: When people say stupid things (It just annoys me..), when people take earphones out of my ears, crowds, lines and when people talk about my life as if they know me.
I love Horror & Comedy movies.
My favourite animes (in order) are: Bleach, Shingeki no Kyojin & Sword Art Online
My favourite mangas (in order) are: Bleach, Rosario + Vampire & Shingeki no Kyojin

As for my deficiencies(/bad qualities)..

I am colour-blind.
I am short.
I have messy hair.
I have a Fast Metabolism (which has caused all the above).
I tend to be short-tempered at times.

>> I'll try to keep it updated if I can.. Happy Gaming~.
15? 4th year of highschool? does that include 5th, 6th, 7th, and 8th grade? or 6th, 7th, 8th and 9th? Im 15 as well but I am currently in 9th grade.

4th year of high school for me is the 10th grade.

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Post  Tensei on Thu Mar 13, 2014 7:06 pm

And you use Vagisil.
no need to thank me.

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Post  Byakuya Kuchiki on Thu Mar 13, 2014 7:10 pm

That "joke" has expired Mr.OneLiner, try something new and stop being a broken record stuck on pause.

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Post  Sam on Thu Mar 13, 2014 7:49 pm

Being 1/4 Jamaican (I don't like it but oh well) I wanna just point out that you are one weird Jamaican.
Seeing as you are going into or already in secondary school what do you plan on majoring?

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Post  Hasashi on Thu Mar 13, 2014 8:42 pm

How is it in Jamacia? I might visit, or I will visit when im older ^^

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Post  Sam on Thu Mar 13, 2014 8:45 pm

Hasashi wrote:How is it in Jamacia? I might visit, or I will visit when im older ^^
Terrible, don't go.

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Post  Moo on Fri Mar 14, 2014 12:04 am

Byakuya Kuchiki wrote:
Moo wrote:
Byakuya Kuchiki wrote:Okay, so I've decided to redo my introduction, (Improper use of commaseeing as how my older one was hardly clear enough.

Noted.

Okay so I'm from Jamaica, (This is called awkward diction. F in University.)
 
I have not been taught of such diction.

No shit you haven't been taught of 'such diction' (which is superfluous), you're a fifteen year-old boy. 

15 right now, becoming 16 in May (firstly, beween Jamaica, and 15 there is a missing connecting phrase thus his sentence is fragmented. [I'm/I am] [/] is the rhetoric way of correcting phrases.).

I wasn't trying to go 'full-on grammar' in this Introduction. However, it seems I am being graded on it so I shall do 'full-on-grammar' every time if that's what you want.

I'm in my 4th year of High School, my favourite colour is Orange.
I like to listen to Pop & Rock music genres mostly, I seldomly

(seldomly is not a word. [seldom]*)

I know of this.

use my brother's PS3. My favourite things to eat are: Popcorn, Fish, American Apples, Pear (Proof your english is not as strong as you feel it is. Jamaicans call Avocado's Pear. Ergo the singular use of the word, however if in fact you were referring to the Pears which the rest of the world acknowledges then you would need to add [s]),

I was not referring to an Avocado. I was referring to an actual Pear. However, noted.

[and] 
Watermelon whilst I dislike: Ackee, Grater Cake, Callaloo, Porridge, Pumpkin and a lot more =|
I like Action, Shooting, Fantasy & RPG games (sentence is awkward, as action, shooting, and fantasy are general terms. Without first insinuating their directed means, your sentence no longer means what you want it to mean. Also comma after RPG games) and (Unnecessary use of And. [. I]*) 

Invalid. If I were to correct my own sentence a semi-colon would be used to introduce my likeness towards mythology. Additionally, the sentence is not awkward as the terms are not general; the terms are genres of games.

Sorry, you introduced "Action, Shooting, and Fantasy" before you introduced their correlating genre. The listed topics can all be linked to movies, books, etc., therefor the terms are general and misleading; which is awkward. Also, your phrase is read as "I like action, shooting, fantasy, and rpg games, and I find mythology interesting 


I find mythology interesting
(I know Egyptian, Norse, Atlantean and Greek Mythologies). I dislike: When people say stupid things (It just annoys me.. (Improper use of ellipsis)

The use was not improper.

[size=13.333333969116211]ellipses - the omission from speech or writing of a word or words that are superfluous or able to be understood from contextual clues.
[/size]Your use of the ellipsis for one did not include enough dots, (. . .) also provided no excess content but instead represented a pause in expression. This is an improper use of the ellipses

when people take earphones out of my ears, crowds, lines and when people talk about my life as if they know me.
I love Horror & Comedy movies.
My favourite animes (in order) are: Bleach, Shingeki no Kyojin & Sword Art Online
My favourite mangas (in order) are: Bleach, Rosario + Vampire & Shingeki no Kyojin
(The following excerpt goes against your chosen format.)

What chosen format?

As for my deficiencies(/bad qualities)..(improper use of ellipsis)

Invalid. Ellipsis were used to introduce another term for the word.

[size=13.333333969116211]ellipses - the omission from speech or writing of a word or words that are superfluous or able to be understood from contextual clues.
[/size]Your use of the ellipsis for one did not include enough dots, (. . .) also provided no excess content but instead represented a pause in expression. This is an improper use of the ellipses


I am colour-blind.
I am short.
I have messy hair.
I have a F[f]ast Metabolism (which has caused all the above).
I tend to be short-tempered at times.

No, "F" not "f", "Fast" is capitalized because "Fast Metabolism" is a condition itself, the "Fast" is not an adjective.

Fast Metabolism is not a scientific label, therefor fast metabolism is a phrase entitled to a condition. Meaning "F" (which is only correct if addressing a name, place, or thing) should be "f". Your use of fast is an adverb, you're mistaking it for a proper noun.

[size=13.333333969116211][size=17.77777862548828]fast[/size]
 [[size=13.333333969116211]fast, fahst[/size]]  [size=11.111111640930176]Show IPA[/size]
[/size]
[size=13.333333969116211]adjective, [/size][size=13.333333969116211]fast·er, [/size]fast·est.
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(All phrases in the above excerpt are fragments.)

I'm fully aware of that, Moo. You think you're correcting me when I already know the flaws in this introduction.

>> I'll try to keep it updated if I can.. Happy Gaming~.


... When "Grammar Police" turn out to be little Jamaican boys who know nothing of the English Language Arts.

You think you're correcting me when I already know the flaws. I was not writing with 'full-on grammar', if you were too busy trying to make me look stupid you would have realized I was being somewhat casual. Better luck next time, Moo.

PS: Let me know when you grow up.

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Post  Byakuya Kuchiki on Fri Mar 14, 2014 5:51 am

Permafrost wrote:Being 1/4 Jamaican (I don't like it but oh well) I wanna just point out that you are one weird Jamaican.
Seeing as you are going into or already in secondary school what do you plan on majoring?
I'm doing the following subjects right now:

Human & Social Biology
English Language
English Literature
Mathematics
Social Studies
History
Principles of Business
Information Technology

Going into the 10th grade allows you to choose your own subjects as I plan to become a Psychologist.

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Post  Byakuya Kuchiki on Fri Mar 14, 2014 5:53 am

Hasashi wrote:How is it in Jamacia? I might visit, or I will visit when im older ^^
Terrible. Please, don't come q.q People don't come IN Jamaica, people come OUT of Jamaica. Crime rates are skyrocketing, the economy is crap, the people are so vulgar and nonsensical at times among others.
Stay. Away. '-' (Not even joking).

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Post  Byakuya Kuchiki on Fri Mar 14, 2014 6:01 am

Moo wrote:
Byakuya Kuchiki wrote:
Moo wrote:
Byakuya Kuchiki wrote:Okay, so I've decided to redo my introduction, (Improper use of commaseeing as how my older one was hardly clear enough.

Noted.

Okay so I'm from Jamaica, (This is called awkward diction. F in University.)
 
I have not been taught of such diction.

No shit you haven't been taught of 'such diction' (which is superfluous), you're a fifteen year-old boy. 

Yet still, I'm smarter than you.

15 right now, becoming 16 in May (firstly, beween Jamaica, and 15 there is a missing connecting phrase thus his sentence is fragmented. [I'm/I am] [/] is the rhetoric way of correcting phrases.).

I wasn't trying to go 'full-on grammar' in this Introduction. However, it seems I am being graded on it so I shall do 'full-on-grammar' every time if that's what you want.

I'm in my 4th year of High School, my favourite colour is Orange.
I like to listen to Pop & Rock music genres mostly, I seldomly

(seldomly is not a word. [seldom]*)

I know of this.

use my brother's PS3. My favourite things to eat are: Popcorn, Fish, American Apples, Pear (Proof your english is not as strong as you feel it is. Jamaicans call Avocado's Pear. Ergo the singular use of the word, however if in fact you were referring to the Pears which the rest of the world acknowledges then you would need to add [s]),

I was not referring to an Avocado. I was referring to an actual Pear. However, noted.

[and] 
Watermelon whilst I dislike: Ackee, Grater Cake, Callaloo, Porridge, Pumpkin and a lot more =|
I like Action, Shooting, Fantasy & RPG games (sentence is awkward, as action, shooting, and fantasy are general terms. Without first insinuating their directed means, your sentence no longer means what you want it to mean. Also comma after RPG games) and (Unnecessary use of And. [. I]*) 

Invalid. If I were to correct my own sentence a semi-colon would be used to introduce my likeness towards mythology. Additionally, the sentence is not awkward as the terms are not general; the terms are genres of games.

Sorry, you introduced "Action, Shooting, and Fantasy" before you introduced their correlating genre. The listed topics can all be linked to movies, books, etc., therefor the terms are general and misleading; which is awkward. Also, your phrase is read as "I like action, shooting, fantasy, and rpg games, and I find mythology interesting 


I find mythology interesting
(I know Egyptian, Norse, Atlantean and Greek Mythologies). I dislike: When people say stupid things (It just annoys me.. (Improper use of ellipsis)

The use was not improper.

ellipses - the omission from speech or writing of a word or words that are superfluous or able to be understood from contextual clues.
Your use of the ellipsis for one did not include enough dots, (. . .)
I know of this, I write stories.

also provided no excess content but instead represented a pause in expression. This is an improper use of the ellipses

No.

when people take earphones out of my ears, crowds, lines and when people talk about my life as if they know me.
I love Horror & Comedy movies.
My favourite animes (in order) are: Bleach, Shingeki no Kyojin & Sword Art Online
My favourite mangas (in order) are: Bleach, Rosario + Vampire & Shingeki no Kyojin
(The following excerpt goes against your chosen format.)

What chosen format?

As for my deficiencies(/bad qualities)..(improper use of ellipsis)

Invalid. Ellipsis were used to introduce another term for the word.

ellipses - the omission from speech or writing of a word or words that are superfluous or able to be understood from contextual clues.
Your use of the ellipsis for one did not include enough dots, (. . .) also provided no excess content but instead represented a pause in expression. This is an improper use of the ellipses

See above.

I am colour-blind.
I am short.
I have messy hair.
I have a F[f]ast Metabolism (which has caused all the above).
I tend to be short-tempered at times.

No, "F" not "f", "Fast" is capitalized because "Fast Metabolism" is a condition itself, the "Fast" is not an adjective.

Fast Metabolism is not a scientific label, therefor fast metabolism is a phrase entitled to a condition. Meaning "F" (which is only correct if addressing a name, place, or thing) should be "f". Your use of fast is an adverb, you're mistaking it for a proper noun.

1) Fast isn't an adverb... It's an adjective, lol.
2) See the sentences below your Google definition.
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Did I not just say... "Fast" wasn't used as an adjective so it can't be a common letter, you nit. "Fast Metabolism" is a condition, meaning, it must be capitalized. The "Fast" isn't an adjective, it is a part of the entire word which makes a term.
(All phrases in the above excerpt are fragments.)

I'm fully aware of that, Moo. You think you're correcting me when I already know the flaws in this introduction.

>> I'll try to keep it updated if I can.. Happy Gaming~.


... When "Grammar Police" turn out to be little Jamaican boys who know nothing of the English Language Arts.

You think you're correcting me when I already know the flaws. I was not writing with 'full-on grammar', if you were too busy trying to make me look stupid you would have realized I was being somewhat casual. Better luck next time, Moo.

PS: Let me know when you grow up.

#rekd

Once again, let me know when you grow up. Also, stop thinking you can "outsmart" me because your 3rd grade knowledge isn't sufficient to do so.
Anyhow, this is my last reply to you, have a good day.

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Post  Moo on Fri Mar 14, 2014 6:37 am

Byakuya Kuchiki wrote:
Moo wrote:
Byakuya Kuchiki wrote:
Moo wrote:
Byakuya Kuchiki wrote:Okay, so I've decided to redo my introduction, (Improper use of commaseeing as how my older one was hardly clear enough.

Noted.

Okay so I'm from Jamaica, (This is called awkward diction. F in University.)
 
I have not been taught of such diction.

No shit you haven't been taught of 'such diction' (which is superfluous), you're a fifteen year-old boy. 

Yet still, I'm smarter than you.

But you're not and my corrections on your post prove that lol

15 right now, becoming 16 in May (firstly, beween Jamaica, and 15 there is a missing connecting phrase thus his sentence is fragmented. [I'm/I am] [/] is the rhetoric way of correcting phrases.).

I wasn't trying to go 'full-on grammar' in this Introduction. However, it seems I am being graded on it so I shall do 'full-on-grammar' every time if that's what you want.

I'm in my 4th year of High School, my favourite colour is Orange.
I like to listen to Pop & Rock music genres mostly, I seldomly

(seldomly is not a word. [seldom]*)

I know of this.

use my brother's PS3. My favourite things to eat are: Popcorn, Fish, American Apples, Pear (Proof your english is not as strong as you feel it is. Jamaicans call Avocado's Pear. Ergo the singular use of the word, however if in fact you were referring to the Pears which the rest of the world acknowledges then you would need to add [s]),

I was not referring to an Avocado. I was referring to an actual Pear. However, noted.

[and] 
Watermelon whilst I dislike: Ackee, Grater Cake, Callaloo, Porridge, Pumpkin and a lot more =|
I like Action, Shooting, Fantasy & RPG games (sentence is awkward, as action, shooting, and fantasy are general terms. Without first insinuating their directed means, your sentence no longer means what you want it to mean. Also comma after RPG games) and (Unnecessary use of And. [. I]*) 

Invalid. If I were to correct my own sentence a semi-colon would be used to introduce my likeness towards mythology. Additionally, the sentence is not awkward as the terms are not general; the terms are genres of games.

Sorry, you introduced "Action, Shooting, and Fantasy" before you introduced their correlating genre. The listed topics can all be linked to movies, books, etc., therefor the terms are general and misleading; which is awkward. Also, your phrase is read as "I like action, shooting, fantasy, and rpg games, and I find mythology interesting 


I find mythology interesting
(I know Egyptian, Norse, Atlantean and Greek Mythologies). I dislike: When people say stupid things (It just annoys me.. (Improper use of ellipsis)

The use was not improper.

[size=13.333333969116211]ellipses - the omission from speech or writing of a word or words that are superfluous or able to be understood from contextual clues.
[/size]Your use of the ellipsis for one did not include enough dots, (. . .)
I know of this, I write stories.

also provided no excess content but instead represented a pause in expression. This is an improper use of the ellipses

No.

when people take earphones out of my ears, crowds, lines and when people talk about my life as if they know me.
I love Horror & Comedy movies.
My favourite animes (in order) are: Bleach, Shingeki no Kyojin & Sword Art Online
My favourite mangas (in order) are: Bleach, Rosario + Vampire & Shingeki no Kyojin
(The following excerpt goes against your chosen format.)

What chosen format?

As for my deficiencies(/bad qualities)..(improper use of ellipsis)

Invalid. Ellipsis were used to introduce another term for the word.

[size=13.333333969116211]ellipses - the omission from speech or writing of a word or words that are superfluous or able to be understood from contextual clues.
[/size]Your use of the ellipsis for one did not include enough dots, (. . .) also provided no excess content but instead represented a pause in expression. This is an improper use of the ellipses

See above.

I am colour-blind.
I am short.
I have messy hair.
I have a F[f]ast Metabolism (which has caused all the above).
I tend to be short-tempered at times.

No, "F" not "f", "Fast" is capitalized because "Fast Metabolism" is a condition itself, the "Fast" is not an adjective.

Fast Metabolism is not a scientific label, therefor fast metabolism is a phrase entitled to a condition. Meaning "F" (which is only correct if addressing a name, place, or thing) should be "f". Your use of fast is an adverb, you're mistaking it for a proper noun.

1) Fast isn't an adverb... It's an adjective, lol.
2) See the sentences below your Google definition.
[size=13.333333969116211][size=17.77777862548828]fast[/size]
 [[size=13.333333969116211]fast, fahst[/size]]  [size=11.111111640930176]Show IPA[/size]
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[size=13.333333969116211]adjective, [/size][size=13.333333969116211]fast·er, [/size][size=13.333333969116211]fast·est.[/size]
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Did I not just say... "Fast" wasn't used as an adjective so it can't be a common letter, you nit. "Fast Metabolism" is a condition, meaning, it must be capitalized. The "Fast" isn't an adjective, it is a part of the entire word which makes a term.

"Fast Metabolism" is not a condition lol It's Hypermetabolism. The term fast metabolism uses fast as an adverb (describing action), therefor its not to be capitalized lol. I provided a link to the dictionary because clearly you need it.

(All phrases in the above excerpt are fragments.)

I'm fully aware of that, Moo. You think you're correcting me when I already know the flaws in this introduction.

>> I'll try to keep it updated if I can.. Happy Gaming~.


... When "Grammar Police" turn out to be little Jamaican boys who know nothing of the English Language Arts.

You think you're correcting me when I already know the flaws. I was not writing with 'full-on grammar', if you were too busy trying to make me look stupid you would have realized I was being somewhat casual. Better luck next time, Moo.

PS: Let me know when you grow up.

#rekd

Once again, let me know when you grow up. Also, stop thinking you can "outsmart" me because your 3rd grade knowledge isn't sufficient to do so.
Anyhow, this is my last reply to you, have a good day.

> Gets grammar raped
> Says they know ALL the flaws, and defends a few points
> Gets grammar raped on defended flaws
> Tells rapist their knowledge isn't sufficient (superfluous again) to outsmart them
> Has been outsmarted every comment they've made on their post

3rd grade? Try university level lol. You're a fifteen year old boy who thinks he has Websters tattoo'd on his dick haha. I'd hate to read your stories, because your narration is superfluous and awkward- You don't even know what awkward diction means LOL. You haven't learned the proper use of the ellipses, and you dont know the difference between adverbs and pronouns. When you've graduated high school, then try talk to me.

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Post  Moo on Fri Mar 14, 2014 6:41 am

The more you defend your improper capitalization of "Fast Metabolism" the dumber you look, because all it takes is for you to search it up for you to see its not a medical term, name, or condition. Metabolism is a thing, fast is a describing action (which is not to be capitalized or mistaken for a pronoun). 

fast metabolism = metabolism is fast

AGAIN; this is not a medical term, name, or condition. Stop making yourself look worse than you already do haha.

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Post  Guest on Fri Mar 14, 2014 12:53 pm

Moo, will you shut the fuck up for once you god damn troll.

You're flooding this thread with your non-sense.

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Post  Teddy on Fri Mar 14, 2014 2:41 pm


Its just moo being moo. You just respond to him or ignore him.

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Post  Byakuya Kuchiki on Fri Mar 14, 2014 6:03 pm

Teddy wrote:
Its just moo being moo. You just respond to him or ignore him.
Preferably the latter.

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Post  Moo on Fri Mar 14, 2014 6:38 pm

Byakuya Kuchiki wrote:
Teddy wrote:
Its just moo being moo. You just respond to him or ignore him.
Preferably the latter.

Good boy, accept your ignorance.

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Post  Sess on Fri Mar 14, 2014 9:31 pm

The both of you should come off of here with your intelligent bullshit to ease the burden of dumb people like myself wondering whether to try to understand or to ignore. 

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Post  Moo on Sat Mar 15, 2014 2:38 am

Sess wrote:The both of you should come off of here with your intelligent bullshit to ease the burden of dumb people like myself wondering whether to try to understand or to ignore. 

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Good point however, firstly byak wont fight me, and two byak isnt close to my skill level at all lmao I'd finish him way too fast.

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Post  The Old Man on Thu Apr 10, 2014 12:25 pm

I would like to point out moo has no skill ^^^^ I rest my case

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Post  Sia on Sun Apr 20, 2014 6:50 pm

Ichigo Kurosaki wrote:Okay, so I've decided to redo my introduction, seeing as how my older one was hardly clear enough.
Okay so I'm from Jamaica, 15 right now, becoming 16 in May. I'm in my 4th year of High School, my favourite colour is Orange.
I like to listen to Pop & Rock music genres mostly, I seldomly use my brother's PS3. My favourite things to eat are: Popcorn, Fish, American Apples, Pear, Watermelon whilst I dislike: Ackee, Grater Cake, Callaloo, Porridge, Pumpkin and a lot more =|
I like Action, Shooting, Fantasy & RPG games and I find mythology interesting (I know Egyptian, Norse, Atlantean and Greek Mythologies). I dislike: When people say stupid things (It just annoys me..), when people take earphones out of my ears, crowds, lines and when people talk about my life as if they know me.
I love Horror & Comedy movies.
My favourite animes (in order) are: Bleach, Shingeki no Kyojin & Sword Art Online
My favourite mangas (in order) are: Bleach, Rosario + Vampire & Shingeki no Kyojin

As for my deficiencies(/bad qualities)..

I am colour-blind.
I am short.
I have messy hair.
I have a Fast Metabolism (which has caused all the above).
I tend to be short-tempered at times.

>> I'll try to keep it updated if I can.. Happy Gaming~.

Just for future reference anime, manga and other Japanese words are both plural and singular at the same time. Your welcome. ^^ I saved you time from typing the "s"~

I love Rosario Vampire but I haven't read it in a long time. I also like the video game genres you put, though I prefer Third person shooters...cause I suck at FPS. I still find mythology interesting and I also have a fast metabolism.

Also...I couldn't help but notice the English class going on above. I thought this was a forum for a BYOND GAME. Not English101.forumotion.com
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Post  Exo on Mon Apr 21, 2014 7:55 am

Moo is really just here to piss people off.

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Post  Byakuya Kuchiki on Mon Apr 21, 2014 10:31 am

Sia wrote:
Ichigo Kurosaki wrote:Okay, so I've decided to redo my introduction, seeing as how my older one was hardly clear enough.
Okay so I'm from Jamaica, 15 right now, becoming 16 in May. I'm in my 4th year of High School, my favourite colour is Orange.
I like to listen to Pop & Rock music genres mostly, I seldomly use my brother's PS3. My favourite things to eat are: Popcorn, Fish, American Apples, Pear, Watermelon whilst I dislike: Ackee, Grater Cake, Callaloo, Porridge, Pumpkin and a lot more =|
I like Action, Shooting, Fantasy & RPG games and I find mythology interesting (I know Egyptian, Norse, Atlantean and Greek Mythologies). I dislike: When people say stupid things (It just annoys me..), when people take earphones out of my ears, crowds, lines and when people talk about my life as if they know me.
I love Horror & Comedy movies.
My favourite animes (in order) are: Bleach, Shingeki no Kyojin & Sword Art Online
My favourite mangas (in order) are: Bleach, Rosario + Vampire & Shingeki no Kyojin

As for my deficiencies(/bad qualities)..

I am colour-blind.
I am short.
I have messy hair.
I have a Fast Metabolism (which has caused all the above).
I tend to be short-tempered at times.

>> I'll try to keep it updated if I can.. Happy Gaming~.

Just for future reference anime, manga and other Japanese words are both plural and singular at the same time. Your welcome. ^^ I saved you time from typing the "s"~
Thanks! Very Happy

I love Rosario Vampire but I haven't read it in a long time. I also like the video game genres you put, though I prefer Third person shooters...cause I suck at FPS. I still find mythology interesting and I also have a fast metabolism.
You should probably read R+V, it even finished now. It got kinda tear-jerking and corny at parts but still a decent storyline (might I add there's hardly any "revealing" scenes anymore). Fantasy & RPG are actually my most preferred game genres and even though I'm "not too good" in Black Ops 2 multiplayer (FPS) I'm good in the Zombies mode and I wish it had a "Switch View" option that switches between TPS (Third Person Shooter) and FPS but sadly it doesn't. I love Mythology but I haven't really read any in YEARS so I'm kinda rusty at the moment.

Also...I couldn't help but notice the English class going on above. I thought this was a forum for a BYOND GAME. Not English101.forumotion.com
Ignore it xD.

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Post  John_KEELED_U on Fri Nov 13, 2015 9:45 pm

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